Alright, today we were supposed to comment on the others artwork, and instead of shouting my opinion out in the class room I decided to write it down on this blog so that the artists can always come back to it and if they forget it it's still there for them to see.
For Sofie - Rose Coloured Replacement
You might have it displayed on a white room on a white pedestal, so that all the attention goes to the art work. The small quote was really clear for me.
I like the picturesque rose colored glasses, with it's smart symbolism behind it. It makes the onstander think.
The letter with the quote on it, was extremely clear to me, but can also be seen in many different ways, so you would need to explain YOUR thinking to some people. Or just let them make their own idea and extract their own symbolism from it.
I however dislike the sticker with airmail you stuck in the corner, because in my opinion they might be unnecessary since it's bold color take the attention from the white envelope, and the main artwork, and if it's needed for the artwork's idea you might see that the stamp you painted easily does the job.
For Mirre - We are what we buy
(No this is others comment on my art work)
It's simple, and it makes you think, it's simple. I like that.....
You could have made it 3D, to make it more appealing.
Dislike, it looks a bit unprofessional, justification, I had less time that you and that's my style messy and simple, nothing too professional because I AM NOT a professional.
For June - Pokémon Up For Adoption For Free (Did You Forget About Us?)
Likes, the art work is really cute, and it's recognizable, realistic, colorful and the emotion of sadness is extremely visible.
The card-board background represents the space in which animals are put helplessly up for adoption.
Another like is that everyone has at least heard of Pokémon, and the Pokémon in the artwork is the old Pokémon that is known by the early player and might not be known by the new generation of players.
The background text also reminds me of the text put on those cardboard boxes in which animals are abandoned on the street.
Dislike..... Nothing really, however you could change the font on the back or makes the text come forwards. If you'd had the time you could have made a cage in which the Pokémon was stored.
For Lodin - Bin the Earth
Likes, the earth is really easily identified as an earth, the trash can is visibly a trash can however i'd make one with smaller holes because the trash might fall out of this one. The picture you put up front it looks like a recycling bin somehow.
With the earth thrown carefully in it, is what i'm seeing, so you could have made it put it carelessly in instead, because that is what we're doing, we are not carefully throwing the earth.
However now the reaction I have was "look it's an earth..... Wait, is it in a bin? Why?"
"Less is More" Lodin
For Morgan - Facebook & Spotify
It's clear to me that it's the Spotify logo, on top of the Spotify logo......
However the message is not really clear to me.
After Explanation
I understood, that Facebook is locking people in and that Spotify is pushing Facebook up and Spotify is piggybacking with Facebook.
Dislikes, not many people might understand the symbolism because, simply it is not explained very well.
Summarized, the image is clear, we know what it is..... We just don't know why it's like that, and what is the meaning of what we see.
Everyone can make their own symbolism of it.
For Andreas - World chained by Facebook
The Facebook thing, is like the ball and chain they have in prisons. The chain is a chain simple. THE EARTH looks like a frikkin BEACH BALL..
For Marta - Holding Up the World
Likes, it is visible to see what it is.
However some people can not see what it is.
Sorry, for short at the end but TIME IS FAST, and I can't run.
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